I was straddling her, kissing her neck, her cheek, her lips. Nothing we hadn't done before. That was as far as it ever went. Slowly, I lifted off her shirt, looking at her glowing skin in the candle light, thinking about how perfect she was, how well made. I reached a hand around her back to unclasp her bra as my other hand trailed through her hair.
Sliding both the straps down her shoulders, I finally gazed upon her breasts, silky-smooth, pale in the flickering light. I kissed her lips again, then made my way down her chest, peppering every inch of her with kisses before reaching those beautiful mounds. Lightly, I kissed one nipple, then the other. I took it into my mouth, switching on and off. I flicked it fast with my tongue, then slowly swirled it around her nipples, taking care not to touch them, making sure she noticed I wasn't touching them. Every time I sent my tongue across one she'd moan so softly, I wasn't sure I'd heard her.
Finally she whispered "Please, take off the rest of my clothes." I looked at her, astonished, and smiled. I leaned over to kiss her breasts again. "Please," she said "don't make me beg." I smiled and kissed her lips. "Okay," I whispered. I kissed my way down to her zipper, undid it, slid her jeans down her slender legs and tossed them onto a chair. I spread her legs and felt her trembling. Slowly, seductively, I kissed her inner thighs, all the way up, until I reached her pink fleshy mound.
I touched her between her lips with a finger, and she was wet, wonderfully so. I slid a careful finger inside her and heard her moan. I found her g-spot quickly and frigged her until she came. Not wanting to waste the precious liquid, I clamped my jaws onto her throbbing pussy and sucked up her precious juices, tonguing her clitoris until she came again, and then again, until she cried "I can't take it any
more!"
She pulled me off of her and ordered me to strip. I stood naked before her, sitting on the bed. She ran a hand up the inside of my leg and stuck her fingers in my wet pussy, and pulled me onto the bed, flipping me over. She frigged me until I came, and then tongued me, until I too, had to admit defeat. Once again, I straddled her and placed two fingers into her slit, moving them in and out while I worked her little button with the tip of my tongue. She screamed with the last climax, and we both fell, exhausted, into each other's arms.
As we lay together, breathing heavily under the sheets, she turned and kissed my cheek. I smiled at her and she got up and left the room, returning with two towels. "Up for a shower?" she asked innocently. A slow smile snaked across my lips. She had no idea what she was in for...
Join me sexy GreenSmoke
3 comments:
REally enjoyed the story Erotic Story - Her First. Love the slow way the story developed and that the woman receaved a great deal of pleasure.
Very erotic, and slow moveing at the beginning. Which I liked.
Although, it needs a better beginning . You just started with
the kissing,or touching. ect.
Perhaps next time, give the reader an introduction, to your surroundings. What time was it ?
Lights on, off ? Set the mood a little better.
Was she tired ? Just after work ,
perhaps .
Although, you certainly had an effect , on me, or should I say , it....lol.
So, again, good job. Meybe, you
can follow up on 'HER FIRST 2'
You 2 in the shower. You following her in, after she has turned on the warm water? She doesn't even know if your going to join her,or not. Steam in shower prevents her from seeing you even enter.
Ect...
I liked very much, your slow build up, things moveing slowly, then quickining a little, then slow,
back n forth.
So, I believe, you might be a good
erotic book writer,on the rise.
Please, keep it up.
Mark
Rather enjoyed "Erotic Story - Her First" but I have to agree with the previous comment, not enough discription of the surrounding environment. Maybe not entierly needed but small details can change things alot. :)
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